On line 261, we have
"Thanks, sir," you reply as Hofmann leaves.
"reputation: Pug" = -100
accept
I think you were trying to make the Pug hostile once this mission starts, but you're doing it wrong. If you do that, the Pug remain [friendly, hostile, depending on your reputation with them before the mission], and instead a
reputation: Pug
line appears when you finish talking with Hofmann. What you should do is add an on accept
line somewhere in the mission, and have the reputation line be placed under that.
also, there are a few typos up above, such as an extra space between "outfitters" and "here" on line 254.