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“understand the climate feedbacks through the idealized” -> “understand climate feedbacks through idealized”
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“explores the roles of climate feedbacks played in” -> “explores the role of climate feedbacks in”
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“By running the idealized” -> “By running idealized”
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“contribute to the amplified surface temperature changes in polar” -> “contribute to amplified surface temperature changes in the polar region”
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“feedback prefers the tropical” -> “feedback dominates the tropical”
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“the low cloud amount feedback, especially the one over” -> “low cloud feedback, especially over”
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“estimate inversion strength” -> “estimated inversion strength”
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“bring the larger uncertainty” -> “bring larger uncertainty”
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“who have helped” -> “who has helped”
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“Exeter Climate System (XCS)” -> “Exeter Climate Systems (XCS)”
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“3.2 Experiment setup” -> “3.2 Experimental setup”
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“feedback in climate system” -> “feedback in the climate system”
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“showing that partial cloud” -> “showing partial cloud”
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“Check the basic states” -> “Basic states”
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“Compare the COSP diagnostics” -> “COSP diagnostics”
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“Isac” -> Isca”
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“Evaluate COSP outputs” -> “COSP outputs”
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“Compare the approaches to calculate” -> “Calculations of”
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“response to the external” -> “responses to external”
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“key to demystify” -> “key to demystifying”
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“change in response to” -> “changes in response to”
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“to constrain the climate” -> “to constraining the climate”
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“change under global” -> “changes under global”
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“warming in over polar” -> “warming in polar”
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“changes of climate system” -> “changes of the climate system”
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“through the idealized” -> “through idealized”
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“doing so, Isca” -> “doing so, the Isca”
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“developed at University” -> “developed at the University”
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“has no cloud scheme” -> “had no cloud scheme”
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“vital for climate” -> “vital for calculating climate”
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“in climate system” -> “in the climate system”
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“the rest questions” -> “other questions”
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“feedbacks in climate system” -> “feedbacks in the climate system”
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“arrives at the Earth surface” -> “arrives at the Earth’s surface”
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“by the Earth surface” -> “by the Earth’s surface”
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“such as the greenhouse gases” -> “such as greenhouse gases”
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“and downward part” -> “and the downward part”
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“movement of atmosphere” -> “movement of the atmosphere”
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“behaviors that” -> “way in which”
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“to perturbations?” -> to perturbations.”
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“imposed to the system” -> “imposed on the system”
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“which can be aroused” -> which can arise
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Then climate system will response” -> “Then the climate system will respond”
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on right hand side” -> “on the right hand side”
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change that is linearly depend” -> “change that depends linearly”
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a quite large range” -> “quite a large range”
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perhaps can” -> “can perhaps”
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work still needed” -> “work is still needed”
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In climate system” -> “In the climate system”
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feedback in climate system” -> “feedback in the climate system”
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“equals to the surface” -> “equals the surface”
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“due to the Planck’s” -> “due to Planck’s”
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“termed as lapse rate” -> “termed lapse rate”
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“at tropopause” -> “at the tropopause”
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“in an uniform” -> “in a uniform”
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“trapped near surface” -> “trapped near the surface”
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“vapor in atmosphere” -> “vapor in the atmosphere”
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“does not step from various response of relative” -> does not stem from the various responses of the relative”
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“weak positive” -> “weakly positive”
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“show the negative” -> “show negative”
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“the sign disagreements” -> “sign disagreements”
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“evident in cloud” -> “evident in the cloud”
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“(brown bar) is the largest” -> “(brown bar) to be the largest”
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“Recently, lots of effort have” -> “Recently, a lot of effort has”
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“the basic knowledge” -> “basic knowledge”
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“system are briefly” -> “system is briefly”
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“half areas of” -> “half the area of”
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“over lands” -> “over land”
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“their features is” -> “its features are”
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“CRE are large” -> “CRE is large”
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“and are small over” -> “and is small over”
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“uncertain than longwave” -> “uncertain than the longwave”
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“clouds in climate” -> “clouds in the climate”
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“phases of Cloud” -> “phases of the Cloud”
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“such as Southern” -> “such as the Southern”
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“negative in Southern” -> “negative in the Southern”
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“positive in topical” -> “positive in tropical”
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“temperature do not warm” -> “temperature does not warm”
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“larger than liquid clouds” -> “larger than liquid cloud droplets”
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“which is a cooling” -> “which has a cooling”
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“dry air in free” -> “dry air in the free”
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“between moisture boundary layer and dry” -> “between the moist boundary layer and the dry”
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“leads to the higher” -> “leads to higher”
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“the cloudiness at low” -> “cloudiness in the low”
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“previous study such as” -> “previous studies such as”
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“has suggest that models” -> “have suggested that models”
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“feedback in GCMs depend” -> “feedback in GCMs depends”
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“Schematic showing that partial” -> “Schematic showing partial”
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“but the clouds usually involve the air” -> “but clouds usually involve air”
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“hard to be explicitly resolved by the GCMs” -> “hard to resolve explicitly in GCMs”
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“not reasonable enough as” -> “not reasonable as”
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“even the relative” -> “even if the relative”
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“among which the linear” -> “among which a linear”
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“cloud fraction against RH could be simplest” -> “cloud fraction and RH might be the simplest”
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“obtained roughly” -> “obtained a roughly”
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“Although the RHcrit” -> “Although RHcrit”
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“For instances” -> “For instance”
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“the clouds related” -> “the cloud-related”
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“to pursuing a” -> “to pursue a”
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“method is statistical” -> “method is a statistical”
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“proposed the idea to use” -> “proposed to use”
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“due to limitation of” -> “due to the limitations of”
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”sometimes the model data” -> “sometimes model data”
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“such as Guassian” -> “such as the Gaussian”
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alleviate double” -> “alleviate the double”
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discussed in previous” -> “discussed in the previous”
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use the time-invariant” -> “use time-invariant”
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such as boundary” -> “such as a boundary”
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shallow convection schemes” -> “shallow convection scheme”
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different in forms” -> “different in form”
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That is to say, critical” -> “That is to say, the critical”
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Larger critical” -> “A larger critical”
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means the lower” -> “means a lower”
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As pointed by” -> “As pointed out by”
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although where the actual” -> “although the actual”
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“backgrounds and outline” -> “background and outline”
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“backgrounds include” -> “background includes”
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“introduction of climate” -> “introduction to climate”
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“observations about clouds” -> “observations relating to clouds”
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“introduction of Isca model” -> “introduction to the Isca model”
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“structure in polar” -> “structure in the polar”
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“parameterization of simple” -> parameterization of a simple”
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“see if they could ‘reproduce’ such spread in CMIP” -> “see if it reproduces the spread in the CMIP”
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“causes to” -> “causes of”
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“Base on these” -> “Based on these”
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“discusses the possible” -> “discusses possible”
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“products about clouds” -> “products relating to clouds”
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“is about the cloud” -> “is the cloud”
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“briefly described” -> “described briefly”
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“play important roles” -> “have played an important role”
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“the past decades” -> “recent decades”
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“is particularly depend on the satellites” -> “depends particularly on the satellites”
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“the most satellite” -> “most satellite”
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“been therefore been widely used in cloud related researches” -> “therefore been used widely in cloud related research”
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“hve been” -> “have been”
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“but are not limited to” -> “but not limited to”
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“purely based” -> “based purely”
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“shown that CloudSat” -> “shown that the CloudSat”
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“notice that CloudSat” -> “notice that the CloudSat”
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“same criteria used” -> “the same criteria are used”
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“and same statistical” -> “and the same statistical”
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“if the satellite was flying” -> “if the satellite were flying”
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“the atmosphere similar” -> “an atmosphere similar”
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“combing” -> “combining”
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“at University of Exeter” -> “at the University of Exeter”
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“of city Exeter” -> “of the city of Exeter”
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“run much slowly” -> “run much more slowly”
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“without lands” -> “without land”
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“times of ocean” -> “times that of the ocean”
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“cooler than West Pacific” -> “cooler than the West Pacific”
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“change in mixed layer” -> “change of mixed layer”
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“public available” -> “publicly available”
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“not microphysics” -> “no microphysics”
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“response of climate” -> response of the climate”
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“at equilibrium state, and when” -> “at an equilibrium state, then when”
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“decompose the climate” -> “decomposes the climate”
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“by decompose the” -> “by decomposing the”
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“sum clear-sky component and CRE” -> “sum of the clear-sky component and the CRE”
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“can not separate” -> “cannot separate”
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“albedo ones in further.” -> “albedo ones.”
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“decompose each climate” -> “decomposes each climate”
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“combing” -> “combining”
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“TOA from control” -> “TOA between control”
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“case there is” -> “case where there is”
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“would be the changes” -> “would be for the changes”
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“feedbacks are equal” -> “feedbacks to be equal”
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“21-century” -> “21st century”
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“what cloud masking” -> “what the cloud masking”
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“equal with each” -> “equal to each”
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“there is no clouds” -> “there are no clouds”
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“under cloudy condition” -> “under cloudy conditions.”
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“have impact” -> “have an impact”
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“Of course, the method such” -> “Of course, methods such”
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“and detailed description” -> “and a detailed description”
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“cloud simulator) can” -> “cloud simulator), one can”
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“paramter” -> “parameter”
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with the data from” -> “with data from”
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applied in Community” -> “applied in the Community”
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The recent proposed” -> “Recently proposed”
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in polar region rises” -> “in polar regions rises”
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but also confirmed” -> “but is also confirmed”
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cause the retreat of sea ice cover in further” -> “cause the further retreat of sea ice cover”
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feedbacks in polar region” -> “feedbacks in polar regions”
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“other components of climate” -> “other components of the climate”
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“can provide relative clear -> “can provide clear”
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“processes in climate” -> “processes in the climate”
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“contribute to the polar” -> “contribute to polar”
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“according to Stefan” -> “according to the Stefan”
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“warming of atmosphere” -> “warming of the atmosphere”
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“contribution and the surface” -> “contribution and surface”
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“provided in Isca” -> ‘provided in the Isca”
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“3.2 describes the experiment” -> “3.2 describes the experimental”
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“lists the details” -> “and lists the details”
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“run with spectral” -> “run with a spectral”
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“are relative simple” -> “are relatively simple”
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“introduced into climate” -> “introduced into the climate”
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“provides an simple” -> “provides a simple”
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“where the alpha = 3” -> “where alpha = 3”
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“depth in Frierson scheme” -> “depth in the Frierson scheme”
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“fixed in Frierson scheme” -> “fixed in the Frierson scheme”
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“results from BOG” -> “results from the BOG”
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“experiments for BOG” -> “experiments for the BOG”
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“linearly depend on” -> “linearly dependent on”
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“In further” -> “Further”
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“equals to the surface” -> “equals the surface”
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“apply radiative” -> “apply the radiative”
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“feedbacks of Isca” -> “feedbacks of the Isca”
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“that radiative kernel” -> “that the radiative kernel”
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“partial perturbation radiative” -> “partial radiative perturbation”
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“the interpretation of the results must be cautious for” -> “interpretation of results must then take account of”
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“offline version radiative” -> “offline version of radiative”
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“relative insensitive” -> “relatively insensitive”
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“model is performed” -> “model run is performed”
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“where certain variable” -> “where a certain variable”
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“where only clear-sky” -> “where only the clear-sky”
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“calculated for Isac” -> “calculated for the Isca”
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“Regarding to the water” -> “Regarding the water”
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“sensitivity occur near” -> “sensitivity occurs near”
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“decreases in poleward” -> “decreases in the poleward”
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“twice of clear-sky” -> “twice the clear-sky”
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“increase the outgoing” -> “increases the outgoing”
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“kernel are negative” -> “kernel is negative”
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“has the similar” -> “has a similar”
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“respect to water” -> “respect to the water”
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“appear in polar” -> “appear in the polar”
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“these experiment when” -> “these experiments when”
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“albedos and the resulting” -> “albedos. The resulting”
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“for each experiments” -> “for each experiment”
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“negative in all” -> “negative at all”
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“strength of Planck feedback in polar” -> “strength of the Planck feedback in the polar”
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“according to Stefan” -> “according to the Stefan”
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“change in polar” -> “change in the polar”
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“with same radiation” -> “with the same radiation”
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“where albedo is” -> “where the albedo is”
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“radiation increase in” -> “radiation increases in”
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“in tropics” -> “in the tropics”
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“in polar regions” -> “in the polar regions”
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in experiment” -> “in the experiment”
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for RRTM” -> “for the RRTM”
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Despite the responses” -> “Despite the fact that the responses”
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relative wide ranges” -> “relatively wide range”
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change in Frierson” -> “change in the Frierson”
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in RRTM” -> “in the RRTM”
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from Frierson” -> “from the Frierson”
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3 times compared to” -> “3 times greater than the”
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in tropical” -> “in the tropical”
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these bottom-heavy” -> “this bottom-heavy”
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in polar” -> “in the polar”
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surface in warming” -> “surface in the warming”
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negative in tropics” -> “negative in the tropics”
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“released in upper” -> “released in the upper”
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“that the sea ice” -> “that sea ice”
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“stability of polar” -> “stability of the polar”
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“brings the largest” -> “brings larger”
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“the rising air parcel in warming” -> “a rising air parcel in a warming”
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“heat in upper” -> “heat in the upper”
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“than in tropics” -> “than in the tropics”
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“near surface” -> “near the surface”
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“in Frierson” -> “in the Frierson”
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“cooling near surface” -> “cooling near the surface”
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“explains largest” -> “explains the larger”
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“change in Frierson” -> “change in the Frierson”
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“strongest in BOG” -> “strongest in the BOG”
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“weakest in Frierson” -> “weakest in the Frierson”
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“discussed in further” -> “discussed further”
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“change of moisture” -> “changes in moisture”
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“are showed” -> “are shown”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“in Frierson” -> “in the Frierson”
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“existing in” -> “exists in”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“in Frierson” -> “in the Frierson”
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“fields are” -> “fields is”
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“significant to” -> “significant in”
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“of radiation” -> “of the radiation”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“for BOG” -> “for the BOG”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“in Frierson” -> “in the Frierson”
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“in Frierson” -> “in the Frierson”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“for BOG” -> “for the BOG”
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“from BOG” -> “from the BOG”
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“from RRTM” -> “from the RRTM”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“in radiation” -> “in the radiation”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“to Frierson” -> “to the Frierson”
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“decomposed in further” -> “decomposed further”
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“with BOG” -> “with the BOG”
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“with RRTM” -> “with the RRTM”
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“with Frierson” -> “with the Frierson”
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“in polar” -> “in the polar”
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“aid of radiative” -> “aid of the radiative”
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“for BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“referred as” -> “referred to as”
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“in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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“from RRTM” -> “from the RRTM”
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“sum of different” -> “sum of the different”
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“according to Stefan” -> “according to the Stefan”
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“emitted by earth” -> “emitted by the Earth’s”
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“here the Figure” -> “here Figure”
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“in warming” -> “in the warming”
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“in cooling” -> “in the cooling”
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“with result” -> “with the result”
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does have effect” -> “does have an effect”
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in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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in BOG” -> “in the BOG”
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at the high” -> “at high”
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being disabled in BOG” -> “is disabled in the BOG”
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“possible associated” -> “possibly associated”
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“while Frierson” -> “while the Frierson”
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“to the polar amplification” -> “to polar amplification”
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“in BOG scheme” -> “in the BOG scheme”
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“response to same” -> “response to the same”
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“in polar region than in tropical region” -> “in polar regions than in the tropical region”
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“is supportive to polar” -> “supports polar”
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“exhibits the bottom-heavy” -> exhibits a bottom heavy”
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“stability at lower” -> “stability of the lower”
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“to the space” -> “to space”
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“the deep convection is” -> “deep convection is”
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“active in tropical” -> “active in the tropical”
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“heat at upper” -> “heat in the upper”
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“Such top-heavy” -> “Such a top-heavy”
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“efficient to emit” -> “efficient at emitting”
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“Therefore, the lapse rate” -> “Therefore, lapse rate”
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“to the polar” -> “to polar”
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“more in tropical region” -> “more in tropical regions”
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“polar region in warming” -> “polar regions in the warming”
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“with the previous” -> “with previous”
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“minimize the repetition” -> “minimize repetition”
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“the cloud feedbacks still” -> “cloud feedbacks still”
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“is cloud scheme” -> “is the cloud scheme”
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“understanding on” -> “understanding of”
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“solid physical backgrounds” -> “a solid physical background”
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“different type of” -> “different types of”
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“some distributions” -> “some distribution”
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“on saturation then,” -> “on saturation it follows that,”
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“constitute to” -> “correspond to”
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“Sundqvist … scheme” -> “The scheme of Sundqvist…”
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“and variance” -> “and the variance”
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“to use according” -> “to use them according”
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“of the clouds scheme” -> “of the cloud scheme”
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“humidity equal” -> “humidity is equal”
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“We also have” -> “We have also”
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“in year” -> “in the year”
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“in ERA5 dataset” -> “in the ERA5 dataset”
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“can not” -> “cannot”
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“from Sundqvist” -> “from the Sundqvist”
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“well in current” -> “well in a current”
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“stratus clouds regions” -> “stratus cloud regions”
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“top of planetary” -> “top of the planetary”
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“but in a slower speed” -> “but at a lower rate”
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“In next chapter” -> “In the next chapter”
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“there is no cloud” -> “there was no cloud”
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“with the maximum” -> “with a maximum”
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“total times that” -> “total number of times that”
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“over Arctic” -> “over the Arctic”
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“if the hydrostatic” -> “if hydrostatic”
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“from linear RH” -> “from the linear RH”
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“the changes in the ALL” -> “the change in the ALL”
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“generally follows the” -> “generally follow the”
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“of net CREs” -> “of net CRE”
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“LW CREs agree” -> “LW CRE agrees”
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“CREs from” -> “CRE from”
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of CREs” -> “of CRE”
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band in tropical” -> “band in the tropical”
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net CREs” -> “net CRE”
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of CREs” -> “of CRE”
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for Sundqvist” -> “for the Sundqvist”
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from simple” -> “from the simple”
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too much clouds” -> “too much cloud”
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has similar effect of” -> “has a similar effect to”
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under Isca” -> “under the Isca”
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“adding simple” -> “adding a simple”
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“suggests that simple” -> “suggests that a simple”
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“relative flexible” -> “relatively flexible”
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“we have introduced” -> “we introduced”
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“and have evaluated” -> “and evaluated”
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“a series …experiments are carried” -> “a series …experiments is carried”
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“feedback in Southern” -> “feedback in the Southern”
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“at the magnitude about 20 Wm^{2}” -> “at a magnitude of about 20 Wm^{-2}”
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“haunted climate” -> “haunted the climate”
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“despite of large” -> “despite large”
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“contributor for the” -> “contributor to the”
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“they decomposed the tropical ocean region” -> “the tropical ocean region was decomposed”
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“identified the low cloud” -> “identified that low cloud”
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“normalized the changes” -> “normalize the changes”
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“pointed by” -> “pointed out by”
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“approaches employed in previous studies are” -> “approach employed in previous studies is”
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“partial derivation” -> “partial derivative”
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“computing expensive” -> “computationally expensive”
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“explicitly decompose the climate feedbacks” -> “decompose the climate feedbacks explicitly”
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“It has shown” -> “It has been shown”
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“pointed by” -> “pointed out by”
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“(2021) that better” -> “(2021), better simulation”
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“Another followed question” -> “Another question”
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“uncertainty is about twice of the role of” -> “uncertainty has a role about twice that of the”
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“in Isca model” -> “in the Isca model”
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“only limited to cloud” -> “limited to the cloud”
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“process in cloud scheme” -> “process in the cloud scheme”
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“produce certain” -> “produce a certain”
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“implementation of observation” -> “implementation of the observation”
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“behaviors of satellite” -> “behaviors of the satellite”
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“in the basic” -> “in basic”
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“temperature, relative” -> “temperature and relative”
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“also he basis” -> “also the basis”
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“parts of cloud” -> “parts of the cloud”
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“are also evaluated” -> “are evaluated”
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“with cloud radiative” -> “with the cloud radiative”
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“different altitude” -> “different altitudes”
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“has not been” -> “has not previously been”
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“In current” -> “In the current”
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“of GCM” -> “of a GCM”
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“In specific” -> “Specifically”
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“are perturbed to get” -> “is perturbed to get”
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“members of PPE” -> “members of the PPE”
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“are fine without” -> “is fine without”
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“its minimalism” -> “a minimum”
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“impact to” -> “impact on”
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“in Sundqvist” -> “in the Sundqvist”
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“straightly” -> “directly”
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“of cloud scheme” -> “of the cloud scheme”
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“response to” -> “respond to”
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“strategy for the parameters are” -> “strategy for the parameters is”
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“is for tropical” -> “is for the tropical”
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“break down them” -> “break them down”
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“in upper” -> “in the upper”
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“is different” -> “are different”
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“of ascending regions” -> “in ascending regions”
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“have have less” -> “have fewer”
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“in upper” -> “in the upper”
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“have much similar pattern with observation, except the” -> “have a very similar pattern to observations, except that”
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“histogram as observation” -> “histograms to observations”
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at upper” -> “at the upper”
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in middle” -> “in the middle”
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much similar” -> “very similar”
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relative small impact” -> “relatively little impact”
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in first” -> “in the first”
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comparing to the” -> “comparing the”
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“time consumptive” -> “time consuming”
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“in current” -> “in the current”
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“relative accurate” -> “relatively accurate”
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“Regarding to the” -> “Regarding the”
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“associated to the” -> “associated with the”
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“are not evident as” -> “is not as evident as”
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“pointed by” -> “pointed out by”
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“see their Fig. 2” -> “Fig. 2”
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“missing Isca” -> “missing in Isca”
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“there are more liquid” -> “there is more liquid”
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“usually have smaller” -> “usually has smaller”
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“asymmetry pattern” -> “asymmetrical pattern”
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“are dominated by” -> “is dominated by”
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“with the very” -> “within the very”
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“much positive, and are located” -> “very positive, and located”
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“Regarding to the” -> “Regarding the”
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“member even produce the negative” -> “members even produce negative”
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“Except the two” -> “Except for these two”
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“is lesser than” -> “is less than”
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“narrow in current” -> “narrow in the current”
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“mean is quite” -> “mean being quite”
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“In the next,” -> “Next,”
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“covariances terms” -> “covariance terms”
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“above diagonal” -> “above the diagonal”
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“relative important” -> “relatively important”
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“mean is close” -> “mean being close”
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“show the low cloud” -> “shows the low cloud”
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“including tropics” -> “including the tropics”
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“in which regions” -> “in which region”
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“nearly zeros” -> “nearly zero”
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“larger that” -> “larger than”
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“has propose a method” -> “proposed a method”
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“clouds formation” -> “cloud formation”
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“has found that” -> “have found that”
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“are relatively low” -> “is relatively low”
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“largest source of” -> “largest sources of”
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“first criteria” -> “first criterion”
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“the blue” -> “blue”
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“the red” -> “red”
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“statocumulus” -> “stratocumulus”
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“in lower” -> “in the lower”
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“over stratocumulus” -> “over the stratocumulus”
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“in lower” -> “in the lower”
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“in despite of the” -> “despite the”
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“over stratocumulus” -> “over the stratocumulus”
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“over stratocumulus” -> “over the stratocumulus”
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“at free” -> “at the free”
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“is relative lower” -> “is lower”
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“mosit” -> “moist”
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“in subtropical” -> “in the subtropical”
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“in tropical” -> “in the tropical”
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“enhanced than” -> “enhanced in”? or “enhanced relative to”?
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“warming in west” -> “warming in the west”
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“in free” -> “in the free”
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“understand the change of low” -> “understand low”
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“inversion strength inhibits” -> “inversion inhibits”
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“less low clouds” -> “fewer low clouds”
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“because stronger” -> “because the stronger”
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“of boundary” -> “of the boundary”
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“in stratocumulus” -> “in the stratocumulus”
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“in trade-wind” -> “in the trade-wind”
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“pointed by” -> “pointed out by”
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of sum of” -> “of the sum of”
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much positive” -> “very positive”
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model is not as” -> “model being not as”
155:
spread … changes are” -> “spread … changes is”
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in current” -> “in the current”
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in parameters” -> “in the parameters”
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“of cloud” -> “of the cloud”
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“right end of very-likely” -> “right-hand end of the very-likely”
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“display certain” -> “display a certain”
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“in midlatitude” -> “in the midlatitude”
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“relative narrow” -> “relatively narrow”
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“both for global and different” -> “both globally and for different”
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“show robust” -> “show a robust”
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“linear correlated” -> “linearly correlated”
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“for ocean” -> “for the ocean”
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“in descending” -> “in the descending”
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“in subsidence” -> “in the subsidence”
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“understand the spread” -> “understanding the spread”
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“show robust” -> “show a robust”
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“show robust” -> “show a robust”
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“involved for the” -> “involved in the”
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“in descending” -> “in the descending”
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“in subsidence regime play” -> “in the subsidence regime plays”
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“key to constrain” -> “key to constraining”
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“responses of climate” -> “responses of the climate”
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“imbalance are normalized” -> “imbalance is normalized”
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“direclty” -> “directly”
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“is break down” -> “is broken down”
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“such as Southern” -> “such as the Southern”
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“there is certain” -> “there is a certain”
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“in trade-wind” -> “in the trade-wind”
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“while increases in stratocumulus” -> “while it increases in the stratocumulus”
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“both regime show” -> “both regimes showing”
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“humidity at lower” -> “humidity in the lower”
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“configuration of cloud” -> “configuration of the cloud”
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“startocumulus” -> “stratocumulus”
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“Regarding to the” -> “Regarding the”
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“perturb parameter in” -> “perturb parameters in”
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“prefers” -> “dominates” (?)
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“with radiation” -> “with the radiation”
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“clouds not explicitly” -> “clouds are not explicitly”
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“part of intermodal” -> “part of the intermodal”
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“in climate system” -> “in the climate system”
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“are still lots of work can” -> “is still lots of work that can”
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“can use current” -> “can use the current”
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“weak in current” -> “weak in the current”
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“only the parameters” -> “only the parameters”
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“perturbations are within” -> “perturbations being within”
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“it is worthy to” -> “it would be worthwhile to”
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“only cloud scheme” -> “only the cloud scheme”
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“itself, other” -> “itself, but other”
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“series experiments” -> “series of experiments”
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“feedbacks in climate system” -> “feedbacks in the climate system”
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“under Isca framework” -> “under the Isca framework”
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“availabel” -> “available”