http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html
Table 1:8.1-1: QEDm Integration Profile - Actors and Transactions
Maybe in the reference column, make an HTML link instead of a textual reference without a HTML link.
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/CapabilityStatement-IHE.QEDm.server.html
There is some "blah" "blah" text in the CapabilityStatement, I guess it will be handled later.
I remarked there is only the Patient resource as supported resources, however the Patient resource is not part of QEDm, and we are missing the other resources.
The same comments are for the CapabilityStatement of the consumer: http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/CapabilityStatement-IHE.QEDm.client.html
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#18111-clinical-data-source
The section references "Section 8.2", but without using an HTML hyperlink, maybe we should add it for better navigability.
Same comment for the section http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#18112-clinical-data-consumer
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#182-qedm-actor-options
The table Table 1:8.2-1: QEDm - Actors and Options references other subsections, we may add here also some HTTP hyperlink to the referenced sections.
Document Provenance (Note 1) : in the table 1:8-2-1, the Document provenance option was not part of the note in the PDF document (https://www.ihe.net/uploadedFiles/Documents/PCC/IHE_PCC_Suppl_QEDm.pdf), was this intentional ? (for both consumer and source)
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#18211-simple-observations-option
The referenced section 3.44.4.1.2.1.1 does not exist in the volume-2 : http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html
But I think this is an error in volume 2 : the section "2:3.44.1.2.1.1 Simple Observations Option Search Parameters" should be "2:3.44.4.1.2.1.1 Simple Observations Option Search Parameters"
Maybe also hyperlink could be helpful for navigation. Same comment for all the sections describing the options (1:8.2.1.1 -> 1:8.2.2.10)
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#184211-discovery-and-retrieval-of-existing-data-elements-description
Maybe rename the section from "1:8.4.2.1.1 Discovery and Retrieval of Existing Data Elements Description" to just "1:8.4.2.1.1 Description"
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#184212-discovery-and-retrieval-of-existing-data-elements-process-flow
Maybe rename the section to simply "1:8.4.2.1.2 Process Flow"
For the SVG image, if you find it really big, you can use this in the value-1.md page :
![Process Flow](./ usecase1-processflow.svg){: width="80%"}
instead of
{%include usecase1-processflow.svg%}
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#184221-discovery-and-retrieval-of-existing-data-elements-with-source-document-links-description
Maybe rename to just "1:8.4.2.2.1 Description"
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/volume-1.html#184222-discovery-and-retrieval-of-existing-data-elements-with-source-document-links-process-flow
Maybe rename to "1:8.4.2.2.2 Process Flow"
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#23444-messages
The text within the Query in the Figure 3.44.4-1 is "Go Query"; we may keep "Mobile Query Existing Data Request" as it was in the PDF, same for the response.
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#2344412-message-semantics
In the query template there are extra ""
GET [base]/[Resource-type]{?[parameters]}
Same remark for the different bullets to explain the query
A link was not well displayed : " [ITI TF-2: Appendix Z.6](https://profiles.ihe.net/ITI/TF/Volume2/ch-Z.html#z.6-populating-the-expected-response-format0", I think you need to replace the format0 by "format)" in the .md
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#3444121-query-search-paramters
The table "Table 2:3.44.4.1.2.1-1" contains internal references to other sections, they can be internal hyperlink
All the rows of the table are in Bold, we may use simple formatting, not bold text format.
In the table, the column "Reference", all the references override the current page, they are referencing to FHIR or to US Core, they should have _target="blank" in the URL definition, as we go out from the website.
In the table, the cell QEDm Actor Option "Medications" should have a rowspan=3, but I don't know how to do it in .md. Same for the cell Occupational Data for Health.
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#23441211-simple-observations-option-search-parameters
n the query template there are extra "", same as described before; and the issue is the same in the following sections (2:3.44.4.1.2.1.*)
Table 2:3.44.4.1.2.1.1-1 : there are some issues in the table, missing rowspan and colspan in some cells. And the issue is the same in the following sections (2:3.44.4.1.2.1.*)
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#234441214-diagnostic-reports-option-search-parameters
Typo : Table 2:3.44.4.1.2.1.4-1: Diagnostic Reposts Option Search Parameters
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#344422-message-semantics
Maybe an old typo: replace "operationoutcome.issue.code" by "OperationOutcome.issue.code" , and replace " operationoutcome.issue.details" by "OperationOutcome.issue.details".
Funny thing, in FHIR OperationOutcome: http://hl7.org/fhir/operationoutcome.html, the link to the valueSet "IssueDetails" is not working (404 page from HL7).
I see that the implementation guide force the "issue.details" to some specific format, I would prefer to have it as a recommendation, not as a requirement (unless there is clear need for this enforcement).
http://build.fhir.org/ig/IHE/QEDm/branches/master/PCC-44.html#234451-security-audit-considerations
Typo following the "Human Requestor (0..n)" (missing an arrow there, from original PDF format).
Abderrazek Boufahja