Hello! Here is some quick feedback (largely on aesthetics) for your HW #3 visualizations (please excuse the brevity of my statements). I did not read any of your written responses, so it’s possible that you address some of what I’ve written there and already have plan to make those changes in HW #4. My feedback does not indicate whether or not you received a Satisfactory or Not Yet score -- Sevan will be reviewing your assignment more holistically and against the rubric specifications.

Plot #1 (line plot)

• Super clean! Nice job
• Consider labeling lines directly rather than legend (couple options out there to explore, including {geomtextpath}, {ggtext}, annotations)

Plot #2 (dumbbell plot)

• Also looking really nice!
• I’d remove the box line around the strip panels on each facet and just have plain text (similar to what we did in class with the salary plot) -- i think the box line is just a bit distracting and not necessary

Plot #3 (line plots)

• Really great job Anna! These look awesome