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There is still on "Consequently, " in the abstract. Can you fix this?
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This is still a consequence in Section 3.4. Can you fix this?
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Another important issue is that "therefore" is used incorrectly in many places in the paper. Therefore means it follows logically from the previous discussion. I think something different is meant in many cases, such as "In order to remedy this problem" or something like that.
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@AndreG-P Check the "Hence" too.
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@AndreG-P I think most of the time, you can just remove these words. Look at how the sentence reads if you do that, and if it reads ok, then do it. I think you just want some word to build a bridge between previous sentences and current sentence. But this is usually not necessary. If the word is essential, then find a more descriptive replacement description, otherwise remove it.
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@AndreG-P as a bonus you could add some lessons learned from this editing experience to our wiki https://isgroup.atlassian.net/wiki/spaces/STUD/pages/22872075/Academic+Writing
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@HowardCohl it's actually very hard for me to decide whether these transitional words are needed or not.
@physikerwelt the literature is not very helpful here. Most literature seems to recommend transitional words because it guides the reader through the argumentation. The only I learned from the books according to this problem is that 'hence' is used in UK English and 'therefore', 'theremore', etc. in US English.
So I deleted hence from the text and sometimes removed however also, if the argumentation seems to work also without this word.
I will publish the final version now.
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Done
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